WOW: Conversation With God
Frozen in the deep snow,
With continuous anxiety, every moment grow,
Repenting at the decision of skiing,
Only if at the reverse opinion of my mom I could bow.
“Save me, God, 🙏 I don’t want to die so soon.”
Murmuring the ice-trapped-me with folding hands.
Silence.
The silence was making the situation bad-even worse.
Hoping for an SOS party; WAOH that would be a boon.
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Save me, God, save me...
Save me…..
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.
.
-“My Child!”, Echoed a hope full of grace.
-“I can’t see you, would you mind showing your face?”, I was anxious.
-“I can help you out of this situation my child but want you to make an effort to prove you are alive!”
-“Look! I’m stuck in ice so deep, want you to help me so with my loving people may I meet.”
-“Life is precious, it’s a gift from me to you. Such mistakes are fatal, don’t you ever do!”
-“You gave me the gift of life? Who are you?”
-“I am God,” a laughter played in the background as the face I couldn’t see.
-“If you’re God, would you mind taking me out of these snow lumps!” disbelief was obvious in my taunting tone.
-“I can help you that is a thing so sure,
But won’t as I want you to help yourself with all might bestowed on you.”
-“I’ve already tried my best to break the ice-trap; nothing happened as ice is hard shell!”
-“Try this last time with my name on your lips and courage galore.
Believe in yourself, life will give you such challenges more!”
Gathered courage and uttered His name,
Strange that time I could get free,
SOS arrived and arrangements spree.
God helps us and I do agree!
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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Oh I so loved this take on the prompt Aditi! You hit the bull’s eye with it!
God helps those who help themselves is all we know but we tend to forget more often. The story here is pithy and hard hitting and it will last etched in my mind for long.
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So happy to have you reviewing my post. Thank you Anagha😚
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God is only with one who is really have self believe and u have written perfectly
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Thanks for reading:)
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Some times he does. Provided he understands what is being asked. Poetry helps. Very few recite poetry when in trouble. They hurl abuse. Great post.
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What is God? God is believing in ourselves and doing what is right.
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A conversation in lyrical form. Superlative!
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Thanks!
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Yes after all God helps those who help themselves.
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Exactly
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I have sensed His presence so many times in the form of humans who take me out of a difficult situation. It is your belief first and then the result.
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I agree with you. It is the belief that actually works.
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Believe in him and he will show you the path. You have penned it beautifully. Loved it.
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Thanks!:)
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The poem, the talk, the background information… all sync together to form an amazing post and interesting title. Way to Go!
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Thank you:)
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Beautifully expressed. True that God has given every one all the abilities to come up in our life. But we hardly realize that.
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The invisible force that keeps us going through events of life is God.
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Believe in God, whoever he may be. A bit difficult in this world, but we should.
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Definition of God is different for all. For me, God is the invisible power that gives us strength to face life.
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That’s a lovely post yaar. Keep it up Aditi…
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Thank you!
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Wow, what a great take on the WOW prompt. Loved your poem.
Cheers
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Thanks dear:)
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Pray to God and row for the shore is the moral of this story.Beautiful thoughts indeed.
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Thanks for summing up the story in a few words:)
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Yes he helps those who help themselves . We should always have HIS name on our lips and in our heart .
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God is an invisible power. It’s faith that makes or breaks our destiny.
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We need to believe in God and in ourselves. I have actually witnessed God’s power. I almost drowned, but miraculously found myself on the shore, when a huge wave threw me off the sea.
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Waoh! Many times we feel invisible force that keeps us moving.
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God is there – for those who seek him relentlessly…lovely post! 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Lovely take on the prompt …god helps those who help themselves ..
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Thanks for reading.
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I liked your post, Aditi. It’s TRUE that God helps those who help themselves. We have just have to try a little and HE will do the rest. #LiveItYoungReads #MyFriendAlexa
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Thanks Rashi. Glad you liked it:)
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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