My Conversation With God

WOW: Conversation With God

Frozen in the deep snow,
With continuous anxiety, every moment grow,
Repenting at the decision of skiing,
Only if at the reverse opinion of my mom I could bow.

“Save me, God, πŸ™ I don’t want to die so soon.”
Murmuring the ice-trapped-me with folding hands.
The silence was making the situation bad-even worse.
Hoping for an SOS party; WAOH that would be a boon.

Save me, God, save me...
Save me…..

-“My Child!”, Echoed a hope full of grace.

-“I can’t see you, would you mind showing your face?”, I was anxious.

-“I can help you out of this situation my child but want you to make an effort to prove you are alive!”

-“Look! I’m stuck in ice so deep, want you to help me so with my loving people may I meet.”

-“Life is precious, it’s a gift from me to you. Such mistakes are fatal, don’t you ever do!”

-“You gave me the gift of life? Who are you?”

-“I am God,” a laughter played in the background as the face I couldn’t see.

-“If you’re God, would you mind taking me out of these snow lumps!” disbelief was obvious in my taunting tone.

-“I can help you that is a thing so sure,
But won’t as I want you to help yourself with all might bestowed on you.

-“I’ve already tried my best to break the ice-trap; nothing happened as ice is hard shell!”

-“Try this last time with my name on your lips and courage galore.
Believe in yourself, life will give you such challenges more!”

Gathered courage and uttered His name,
Strange that time I could get free,
SOS arrived and arrangements spree.
God helps us and I do agree!

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

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39 thoughts on “My Conversation With God”

  1. Oh I so loved this take on the prompt Aditi! You hit the bull’s eye with it!
    God helps those who help themselves is all we know but we tend to forget more often. The story here is pithy and hard hitting and it will last etched in my mind for long.

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  2. We need to believe in God and in ourselves. I have actually witnessed God’s power. I almost drowned, but miraculously found myself on the shore, when a huge wave threw me off the sea.


  3. I liked your post, Aditi. It’s TRUE that God helps those who help themselves. We have just have to try a little and HE will do the rest. #LiveItYoungReads #MyFriendAlexa

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